A common goal

I didn't think this very well. Anyone would want to find out who their mother is.

8 replies to “A common goal”

  1. fell* asleep
    That... strangely WOULD be a fun thing to do together as sisters...

    • Inkdolls

      Okay, thanks for the observation, I'll try to fix that. What I tried to say is not that she once fell asleep on a bus, but that she keeps falling asleep or has at sometime fallen asleep on a bus.

      • Oh, fall asleep in the present-general tense. Yes, of course. I can get a little overzealous with my proofreading since I do so much of it lately ^^'

        • Inkdolls

          Thanks for the confirmation. Your help is very much appreciated 🙂.

  2. jamie59

    LOL! Yes keep it going.

    • Inkdolls

      There's more to come 🙂.

  3. Andrew Armstrong

    The end of Malatinta, or the end of the chapter? I can't quite pin down the reasons, but I really like the stories you tell and the way that you tell them.

    Now and again, both when (it later turns out that) I am awake or I am asleep, I ask myself if I am dreaming, but cannot be sure of the answer. Reality seems very hi rez, stunningly so, but that is not a good indicator because I remember concluding that I was awake during a dream because the scene around me was so hi rez.

    • Inkdolls

      I didn't know that could happen, but I guess it's a thing. I have short bursts of dream imagery before I fall sleep. The mind is quite perplexing.

      Of course it's not the end. There's a lot yet to happen.